Nothing impressive about the aesthetics. It looks like a half-hearted attempt to quickly finish a project.
I don't see any real step-by-step info. For example, you write that one has to choose the proper length BB spindle. You wrote that you did research and chose a 110mm. Why not include some information about actually figuring out the proper bb spindle to chose?
"Beotch" is appropriate for a school project?
Are you practicing to be a low-brow comedian or a money earning professional?
Uhhh what's the purpose of the project? You said it's an "Art project". What exactly is the Art part?
The web design? I was doing stuff like that in the '90's with no web design training.
The photos? Nothing artistic there.
The instructions? Ugghhh.
This is what they're teaching at Penn State for $31k per year?
Thanks for all the feedback. I will be making a lot of adjustments. I understand it looks like something from the late 90's but I had to create it from scratch (code everything) and I have had no previous experience with website building. I used dreamweaver to create the site.
It is an art project, the art is in the descriptive wording and the banner image. Thanks to all that pointed out the grammar errors; this is the reason I wanted other eyes to see it.
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